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发表于 2007-12-31 21:21:11
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What I suggest is you should go to find several compositions about each tittle you want. And then copy the important paragraphs from maybe 5 compositions to write each tittle of the composition. And then put every point of the composition in order.
我建议你去寻找五个不同的作文关于每个题材.然后寻找这五篇作文的优美的句子和各自的重点,把它组成一个作文.
你必须找五个不同的作文关于每个题材.因为单单是一个作文,它的重点不够,它的优美的描述不够吸引人.比方,你找艾滋病的作文,你可能找到有关作文是说如何避免染上艾滋病,有的作文是说艾滋病的普通知识,有的作文是说艾滋病病人的体验关于艾滋病.每个作文有不同的强调的地方.
这是因为我们看事情有不同的观点.有的人看一本书,有的人认为它的内容肮脏,有的人认为它是一本很好的医药的书,有的人认为它是一本很好的爱情故事.每个人有不同的想法.所以他们把自己的想法写进去一个文章.所以如果你单单是抄一篇文章,重点会失之偏颇.如果你抄五篇作文的重点准备一个题材,你说话的时候,内容将是面面俱圆.
You need to find several compositions to write a tittle. This is because one composition may not have enough points, or may not be the tittle you want. Take for example. You want the composition about Aids. Maybe you will find the composition which tells us more about how to prevent Aids, common knowledge of Aids, what the Aids patients say about Aids. Every composition has different focus in a tittle. Take for example, when we read a book. Some may find the content dirty. Others may think this is a good medical book. Others may think this is a very good love story. Different people think different ways. So when they have to write what they think about a thing. They would focus on different aspect. So if you find a composition. That is not enough. But if you find at least 3 compositions about that topic and organise the important facts to be one composition. That composition will be a very good composition. The examiner may think you are a genius and maybe you don’t have to wait for the results, you are taken by the university directly.
Okay. After you have combined all the points you need, you arrange the points in order. You make the decision which point should be introduction, and then content, and lastly conclusion.
好的,当你准备了每个重点,你整理它们.你作出决定哪一个重点要放在开头,内容,和结尾.
当你组织了一个作文,你要把有关作文的第一个字到最后一个字背起来.
当你背了有关作文的优美的文字和优美的结构,你可以说出非常漂亮的话.即使人们没有想到的,你也可以提到.
当你背了不同的题材,它们成为你身体的一部分.你可以随时运用它,不管是在考试或者会话.
After you make a composition, you have to memorise the first word until the last word in the composition.
After you memorise the beautiful words and beautiful structure of the sentense, you can do well in your exam. Even though exam does not have the tittles you memorised, you can use some paragraphs that you memorised to put in the composition.
After you memorise the compositions, it becomes parts of you. You can use it whenever you want, whether in exam or in conversation.
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By doing this, you can do well in your composition part of the exam if you are sitting for the exam. By doing this, you can widen your vocabulary. You can speak English very well. Because when people talk about Internet, drugs, computer, you know how to talk about these topics in English.
这样做,你可以很好的书写一篇作文在考场中.你可以提升你的英文词汇.你可以把英语说得很好.因为当别人说起网络,毒品,电脑,你知道要说什么.
If you want to talk about a topic, you shouldn’t translate what you think into English and then put them into the composition. This will ruin your composition and your English.
如果你要说一个题材,你不应该翻译你心中的想法去英文.它会毁了你的会话.
That is the correct way to improve your English. Because these are hot topics in conversation. You learn how to use the word correctly from the composition you memorise. You learn how to make correct sentences from the composition you memorise.
这是正确的提升英文词汇的方法.因为这些都是热门的题材.你从作文背涌中,学习怎么用正确的英文字.你学习怎样造正确的句子从你的作文背涌中.
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After you memorise the compositions, you will be able to understand English TV news, English newspapers, English magazines, and English novels. Because all the content of the reading materials are only regarding :
你在背了不同的题材后,你可以明白英语电视新闻,英文报章,英文杂志,英文小说.因为全部的英语阅读资料只涵盖以下这些范围:
war and peace,战争与和平
sports,运动
pollution,环抱
AIDS,艾滋病
road accident,车祸
computer,电脑
internet,..网络
these hot topics. (You may find for yourself the topics I haven’t mentioned)
So after you memorise them, you would be able to understand what the media says. You may be wondering where to find these compositions and organise them to be one composition. It is hard to find good English composition books. Well, there is Internet nowadays. You can find the information of all these topics through the Internet. It is so convenient nowadays.
你也可以寻找我没有提到的题材来背.你或许觉得要寻找不同的作文关于一个题材很难.不会的,现在是网络时代.你可以在网络搜索,很方便的.
Further more, you don’t have to walk a long way to improve your vocabulary. You don’t have to memorise the words which are so difficult and hardly meet. By using this way, you will memorise all the words which are useful. It saves your time.
而且,你不需要走漫长的路来提升你的英文词汇.你不必背很难碰到的深涩英文文字.用这个方法,你可以背到许多实用的字.它节省了你的时间.
Memorising things are no problems to us Chinese as we are very hardworking. When we Chinese find that there is a way to make money, we are very hardworking. So, when we find that it is so easy to improve your English, we are very hardworking to achieve the goal of mastering English. The way to improve English is easy. Only two ways. Firstly, improve your grammar. Secondly, improve your vocabulary.
背,对我们华人来说,不是个问题因为我们都是勤劳的.当我们华人发觉哪里很容易找到钱的时候,我们会很努力的.当我们知道什么是容易的方法提升英文,我们会很努力的追赶目标.掌握英文很简单,第一,提升你的英文文法.第二,提升你的英文词汇.
I have told you how to improve grammar. So after you improve your vocabulary by using the way I teach. You will be very good at English. All the girls who sees you are so good at English will fall in love with you. (smiles) They think it is so hard to master English. But just using my method, you can master English. English is so simple.
我已经告诉你如何提升英文文法了.所以你在运用了提升英文词汇的方法,你的英文会很优秀.全部的异性看到你的英文这么好会爱上你.他们以为掌握英语很难,可是只要用我的方法,你就可以掌握英文.英文很简单.
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(You can’t find a composition from the Internet. You only can find the information and organise them to be a composition. And most of the time, you can’t find the information you want. So it is better that looking for the compositions from the encyclopedia.
If you want to find the compositions, you had better look for encyclopedia. They write very good compositions and they gather all the information for you. All the information are well-arranged.)
你要找那七大篇英文文章可以从英文百科全书里找,网络上会比较少,没有能力买英文百科全书,可以向图书馆借。百科全书收集了你所有要找的资料,比方,你要找pollution, 百科全书会列出你要找的资料,它会列明有什么种类的污染,空气污染、海水污染、环境污染。它把全部有关资料都列出来。百科全书可以说是大型的作文书。
你可以通过公众图书馆或学校图书馆借。图书馆里的英文百科全书通常是没有人要借的,所以轻易可以借得到。不过关于网络和电脑这两篇英文文章,旧的百科全书可能没有,要找新的百科全书才有。所以你可以从以往的大学图书馆里借,大学图书馆的百科全书比较新。有时候在图书馆里可以不借书而只是复印您所要的那一页,那么就方便多了。
七大篇文章是我指的:
war and peace,战争与和平
sports,运动
pollution,环保
AIDS,艾滋病
drugs,毒品
road accident,车祸
computer,电脑
internet,..网络(你也可以寻找我没有提到的题材而你又觉得很重要的.)
these hot topics. (You may find for yourself the topics I haven’t mentioned)
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如果你不能背整篇作文,你可以只是学你不懂的英文生字.它也可以帮助你达到掌握英语的目标(扩大你的英文词汇,讲流利的英语,可以明白英语电视新闻和英语阅读刊物).不过当然,它没有背作文这个方法这么好.
当我说出了这些,你会怀疑为什么我却还是不懂得讲英语呢,这是因为我懒惰去读这些题材.
If you can’t memorise the whole composition, you can go and learn the words you don’t know. That can also help you to achieve the goal of mastering English.(improve your vocabulary and speak fluent English and able to understand English news, English reading materials) But of course, it is not as good as the method memorising the composition.
After I have said all these, you might wonder how come I still do not know how to speak English since this is so good? This is because I havent even read one of the compositions. I feel too lazy to read them.
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